Peer Review Reflection

At first I thought my essay was not up to par and needed a lot of work, but the two students who reviewed the essay left very positive compliments and other great ways to improve on the paper. The structure could use a few more paragraphs defending the thesis but I was told that I am moving in a good direction. The essay really just needs to be reorganized and a few more ideas need to be added in order to tie the whole essay together.